24. [FANMADE - EN] 성시경 노래 Sung Si Kyung Music 24.【너의 모든 순간 Every Moment of You】

Hi-hiyee ^_^ Sorry for my much delayed reply. Was away from my KRplus channel *bow*~ 🙏And thank you so much for the feedback 💜 This is why translation fascinates me. Same text yet different interpretation. Now, please allow me to present my reasons behind the word choice 🥰
1. 'because of your presence' = 'as you are here'. The next sentence is 'Because it is you', so it is my attempt to make it sound more like two poetic lines 😊
2. Sorry, but frankly, I've never heard people say 'I'm happy seamlessly'... Is it regional? Because all languages show great variation across not just countries but regions within one country. That's why I'm wondering if 'happy seamlessly' is regional. 😳 It just sounds semantically awkward to be honest.
In fact, my friend and I had a discussion and '빈틈없이' was part of it. There are literal translation and free translation. Literal translation involves word-to-word translation whereas free translation involves translating the general meaning of a text (a.k.a. contextual translation). Since the purpose of '빈틈없이' is to describe the person's happy state, we feel that 'fills me with great joy' conveys the idea 😊
Fill = pervade (be present and apparent throughout); become an overwhelming presence in
3. '가슴이 차올라 나는 온통 너로' is another discussion point. In fact, the song title 'Every Moment of You' means 'every moment with you' / 'whenever I am with you' -- where the focus is 'I'. So, we talked about how it might be more fitting to use 'Every Moment of Yours' since the whole song talks about 'How I wish I could be there with you at every moment of your life', focusing on 'every moment of your life'.
So as you can see, we have different focuses ⬇
🔹Ours = 'The thought of it alone'
🔹Yours = 'The thought of you alone'
온통 = entirely, wholly
'Sends my heart into frenzy' might seem 'too crazy' for you if you look at it individually. But if you look at the whole song, it actually corresponds to 'gazingly enthralled'. Like I said, mine is free translation, not literal translation 😊
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Once again, thank you ever so much for the feedback. I really appreciate it *bow bow*~ 🙏🥰 I'll pin your comment so others can read and understand the different takes on the translation, okay? 💜 Enjoy rest of your week! 🍀😊

@@CapyPurin_celestial ohkay haaa. we separate ways here and there. but I had to make a point that not stubbornly, sincerely that i'm happy seamlessly is quite important poetic phrase what would make you imagine and picture the state at the same time and I really think that conveying meaning doesn't cut it for this particular sentence. if you read jonathan frazen's work or any other writers' work you would know they get creative with sentences to convey the picture in writer's mind and state of mind of character. 정경 情景. I didnt think that you would put sentences without consideration and I see it. but as a person who studied literature for some time I cant help but tell it. haaa I dont mean to disrespect the work you've done or in meaning to make you change anything in my taste. just thought it is important to tell you that haaa
thank you for kind explanation ^^
have good one!
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I know right? Such a mystery... even professional vocal coaches are baffled ~
Have you watched these clips? ⬇
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Hi-hiyee 😊 You're most welcome 🤝 Thank you so much for watching! *bow*~ 🙇‍♀️ I can totally relate to you. To me, that's what he and his music have done for me, too 💜💜💜 This channel is not affiliated to SSK in any way, so please don't forget to watch his original video (Link in caption) and if I'm not wrong, he reads comments when he can 😉😉😉 Have a lovely weekend 🍀🍀🍀

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